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"RinoTheBouncer"

"You could take all this, take it away. I still have it all, 'cause I've climbed the tree of life, and that is why no longer scared if I fall. When I get lost in space I can return to this place 'cause you're the one".

Model : RinoTheBouncer (RENO) [Myself]
Photographer : ~xKillerEyesx
Edited by : RinoTheBouncer (RENO) [Myself]

Special Thanks to : ~xKillerEyesx for the special and elaborate efforts :)

"I wanted to keep the title strictly limited to the model's name (Myself), to leave the explanation of the meaning up to each viewer, I myself thought of it as portrayal of a new generation, like the family tree this man came from different origins, they all met to form one human being who is a mixture and a variety of different new / old social, political, emotional, sexual, psychological properties and characteristics. and I also had a personal explanation of Desire, as putting model centered in shot of a tree and a garden which are both references to desire might actually portray that meaning but I'll still leave it open to people to explain it" - RENO

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Image size
4358x3029px 9.34 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/1250 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
30 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Feb 9, 2011, 3:31:30 AM
Sensor Size
24mm
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

The first thing I noticed about this photo was the colors--so beautiful and vibrant! The colors give so much life and energy to this photo.

I really like the setting/subject matter. The tree is wonderful and I love the rock outcrop in the background. The random rocks in the front combined with the dead/brown grass makes the foreground much more interesting than if it was all green. I like the model's pose, but I wish we could see the model's eyes better.

The main thing I have for critique is the composition. There's a lot of movement in the piece, but all the movement sort of leads the viewer's eyes out, and there's not much to really lead the viewer back in. I sketched up the following to hopefully point this out better:

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One of the commenters mentioned that the spaces in the front are sorta empty and they detract a bit--while I don't feel they detract, if there were some other objects there to help bring the movement back inwards it would help.

Hopefully this makes sense!